Monday 3 September 2007

AM - Biker Dan

Hey Dan

This is looking great.
Two simple tweaks I would suggest:

- Adjust the shape of his left bicep near the elbow crease. The lighting shows that the muscle is looking a little too square. A small adjustment here will go a long way.

- Make sure the denim jean material rests flush with the skin of the biker above the hole on his right knee. At the moment there is a gap creating a deep shadow and a floating appearance.

It's always a good sign if the comments are this minor!
cheers
Andrew

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